WALT use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
It was Friday morning. I went to the market in Greymouth with my grandad. When we got there it was sunny. As yellow as the Pak 'n' Save sign. I could see the candy market, the fruit market, the sausage market, and the cracker market. I could hear yelling and people dropping things. I could smell yummy sausages. I could feel the heaviness when I picked up the heavy watermelon. We some crackers and cheese It tasted like creamy cheesy crackers.
Hi Quinn
ReplyDeleteI loved your sentence because it made lots of sense, I also liked the descriptive words that you used.
Did you get a sausage?
From Farrah
Hi Farrah thank you i did like the sausage what was your favourite part?
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ReplyDeletethank you for the comment.
Deleteyour welcome:)
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