Thursday, 7 May 2020

Poetry

Quinn´s Poem 


In the kitchen i can hear the purring of the fridge
The distant noise of the television
The neighbours opening and closing doors


In the lounge i can hear the thumping of the TV my sister is watching 
Elvis our dog is barking loudly 


Outside a  plane flys over it rumbles 
The sound of a water blaster screeching in the distance
The birds are humming on a sunny day
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2 comments:

  1. Sarah8 May 2020 at 09:23

    Hi Quinn
    What a fabulous poem about all the sounds you can hear around your house. My favourite line is " the birds humming on a sunny day" I can really imagine what they would sound like. Did you enjoy writing this type of poem?
    Sarah

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    1. Anonymous8 May 2020 at 10:23

      yes i enjoyed it thanks Sarah

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